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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:09 pm

Arising in my heart

From the bottom of my soul

You’ve stirred within the depths of me

Things I can’t control


A volcano of emotions

Erupts to overflow

Burying the loneliness

For so long I used to know


Falling into ecstacy

Thinking of your kiss

Getting lost while dreaming

Of the touching of our lips


Is that your breath upon my skin?

For it melts me to the core

Or just imagination

That leaves me wanting more?
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Postby dreamergirl on Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:11 pm

wow that's great! very emotional!
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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:34 pm

thank you Eva.....so glad you like it....Barbara :)
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Postby dreamergirl on Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:36 pm

hi barbara, i don't think i have had a chance to say hi to you yet, so hi!! thanks for sharing your work here at net hugs! :lol:
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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 6:43 pm

Hi Eva.... nice to meet you and thank you so much for another very warm welcome to nethugs. I'm finding there are so many wonderful souls here.
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Barbara :)
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Postby TimBucks on Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:47 pm

Super poem, Barbara. Sweet, tender and haunting.

Well Done,
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Postby Deborah Lynne on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:03 pm

Another beauty, Barbara! Love it!
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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:25 pm

Aww...thank you Tim....so sweet of you to say....thank you Barbara :)
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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:25 pm

Thank you Deborah.....you are sooo kind...glad you like it.... :) Barbara
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Postby Shirley Shaw on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:30 pm

It's nice to meet You,
First of All.
Secondly,I really liked,that Poem!
So Intense,
And much Emotion!
Very-Good!
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Postby bradmurphyackermanms on Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:31 pm

Hey Barb, Super "HOT" write, young lady!!! Beautifully crafted work of art!! WHEW!!!!!!!!!
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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:28 pm

Thank you Shirley....nice to meet you too....and I'm glad you like it...Barbara :)
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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:29 pm

Aww...thank you Brad!!!!....(throws some ice water on Brad)....lol
Glad you like it...... :wink: Barb
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Postby Miss Caroline on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:45 pm

I love this poem Barb.......It is great......Keep 'um coming....
GOD loves You, and so do I.

Luv Ya

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Postby wildandwickedlysweet on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:58 pm

I'm glad you like it Carol....thank you so much....Barbara :)
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