WIthout you i'm not me

[emerald]

When you're not here,
something's not quite right.
It's like the stars and moon,
without the night.



It's something strange,
that I can't explain.
It's like Tarzan,
without Jane.


It's like peanut butter,
without the jelly.
It's like Santa Claus,
without his belly.



It's like a joke,
that isn't funny.
It's like Easter,
without the Bunny.



It's like Grandma's gravy,
without the lumps.
It's like a camel,
without any humps.



It's like a present,
without a bow.
It's like a planted seed,
that doesn't grow.



It's like a king,
without a crown.
It's like a circus,
without a clown.



It's like the birds,
without the bees.
Without you,
I'm just not me.

[LadyMustang]

I really enjoyed this write emerald it is very different and unique so very well written a truely enjoyable read and the flow is beautiful I love it.

[Linner]

So many things you have mentioned that just don't work without the other part !! Sigh...know what you mean, girl !!!

Love, Linda

[Shakela]

Dear Emerald,

Wow, just stunning. This is really good. Yeah, I can't imagine all those things without the other. It's just like life without breath. Thanks for a great poem. God bless you and those you love.

Love always,
Shakela

[Doug Holt]

Great writing and a wonderful read.

well done Emerald

hugs from doug

[emerald]

I really enjoyed this write emerald it is very different and unique so very well written a truely enjoyable read and the flow is beautiful I love it.

Thanks dear,glad u loved it.Bless u

[emerald]

I really enjoyed this write emerald it is very different and unique so very well written a truely enjoyable read and the flow is beautiful I love it.

Thanks dear,glad u loved it.Bless u

[emerald]

So many things you have mentioned that just don't work without the other part !! Sigh...know what you mean, girl !!!

Love, Linda

Hello my dear linner,how are u today,thanks for the comments,true love is not complete without the other person u know.Thanks for stopping by girlfriend.God bless

[emerald]

So many things you have mentioned that just don't work without the other part !! Sigh...know what you mean, girl !!!

Love, Linda

Hello my dear linner,how are u today,thanks for the comments,true love is not complete without the other person u know.Thanks for stopping by girlfriend.God bless

[emerald]

Dear Emerald,

Wow, just stunning. This is really good. Yeah, I can't imagine all those things without the other. It's just like life without breath. Thanks for a great poem. God bless you and those you love.

Love always,
Shakela

Hi SHakela,u are very right love without the other person is like life without breath,i should have added that.Thanks for stopping by my dear.Stay blessed.

[emerald]

Great writing and a wonderful read.

well done Emerald

hugs from doug

Thanks dear Doug for stopping by,hope u are doing ok.
Hugs and kisses.

[gjkll]

coooooool poem it flows nicely too

[emerald]

Thank you so much,i'm sure glad you enjoyed reading.
Hugs and kisses
Emerald

[Janice Kennedy]

Dear Emeral, This is just so unique and beautiful. I just loved reading it. I sure hope the Webmaster makes it into an e-card, it would make a really good one.

Love and Blessings Jan 5 stars

[emerald]

thanks Jan,wow! 5 stars dat is sure some rank.Thanks a lot u and other members of this beautiful family are a source of great inspiration to me.
Hugs and kisses
Emerald.