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Postby GoldenRubySummers on Wed Feb 14, 2007 10:32 am

On this particular day of the year,
I just want to thank you for being near.

No big city lights to hide the stars above,
For today is the day to proclaim true love.

I will sit back and listen around,
Until the beat of your heart can be found.

Today I wish to show you that I care,
And I hope that there will be many more days we share.

These words I give you from my heart,
To you, to us, and to such a wonderful start.

By: Brenden Hogge
Death be not the end to my existence
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Postby Jeff Guest on Wed Feb 14, 2007 7:02 pm

I wish you would have posted this a couple days ago, this would have made a wonderful Valentine Ecard!!! Maybe Skip will make it one for next year!!! Excellent write!!!
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Postby GoldenRubySummers on Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:59 pm

Thank you so much. I actually made it into one and emailed it to someone and added little pictures.
I hope you had a great Valentine's day
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Postby Cayorin on Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:44 pm

Somehow, I think this one would be wonderful to put on a wedding program. It reminded me of my special day...Good job!
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Postby Lilian on Fri Feb 16, 2007 9:11 am

That's a beautiful one, Brenda...
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really nice

Postby emerald on Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:15 am

that was really nice brends lovely poem
keep the trail blazing
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Postby Doug Holt on Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:52 am

WONDERFUL WORDS

BEAUTIFUL WORDS

HEARTFELT WORDS OF

LOVE.

Brenden THIS IS A MASTERPIECE

I agree full with all the above comments. would make a beautiful Love

Card Valentine, Wedding an Anniversary or Birthday Take your pick

Webmaster. LOL.

KUDOS ***** BRENDEN


Doug :)
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Postby webmaster on Wed Feb 21, 2007 10:35 pm

Welcome to NetHugs Brenden! I agree with everyone here. Your poem makes a great e-card so here it is:

http://www.nethugs.com/anewstart.shtml

I've made it into a birthday card. I hope you and others will like it! Welcome to the family! :) Thank you Doug for bringing this to my attention.
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Postby Cayorin on Thu Feb 22, 2007 3:56 am

Way To Go Brenda!
Webmaster made your poem even more special, it is a jewel!!
Keep up the good work.
GBU,
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Postby Kennysr61 on Mon Feb 26, 2007 6:51 am

Way to go Sweetie!!! I am so proud of you in all that you do.
Love,
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