Our Life Together

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Our Life Together

Postby snugglebugs on Wed Sep 27, 2006 10:31 am

Come sit down so we can talk
or if we want, we'll take a walk;
It doesn't matter what we do
as long as I can be with you.

We can share our hearts and reminisce
of how we met, or our first kiss;
Then look back on the joy and laughter
and the hope that lies in ever after.

Or we can recall mistakes we've made
and realize the price we've paid;
Whatever happens, we know for sure
there is nothing our love cannot endure.

So if sometimes, we lose our way
God willing we'll get another day;
To ask forgiveness and be forgiven
so we can continue this life we're livin'

For we still have more dreams to dream
and things aren't always as they seem
So lets' hold hands and take a walk
beneath the stars tonight -
and know as long as we have each other
Everything's gonna be alright.

Copyright Donna Deyne September 26, 2006
~ The human heart at whatever age, opens to the heart that opens in return ~
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Postby webmaster on Thu Sep 28, 2006 2:40 pm

This one depicted a love that withstood the test of time beautifully. I've made it into an e-card:

http://www.nethugs.com/ourlife.shtml

I hope you will like it. Thank you for sharing Donna. Hoping to see more of your wonderful work.
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Postby gjkll on Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:46 pm

i really like this poem :D
well done :D 8)
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Postby Jeff Guest on Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:00 pm

Congratulations Donna!!! Beautiful poem and ecard!!! Ole Skip has still got it!!!
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