Don't worry I'm here for you
Ready and willing to cheer you up
I'll always be right by your side
You're my friend, I love you much
Thats what friends are for
To help through thick and thin
When you feel you can no longer function
Thats when you could desperately use a friend
When theres a weight on your heavy laden shoulders
And it's just about to bring you way down
Just turn to the left then turn to the right
Because thats where I'll always be found
You know I'll never forsake you
I'll be there to help bring you abode
Your love is a majestic treasure to me
So I'm here to the rescue, I'll carry your load
(c) Dana Brooks...8-17-06
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by Dana Brooks on Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:01 pm
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by norman on Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:08 pm
WOW AWESOME writing here dana someone should be proud...keep'em coming
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A GENIOUS
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
TO SOME WE SEEM LIKE A FOOL
BUT OUR WORDS OF POETRY
IS JUST OUR EXPESSION TOOL
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by Dana Brooks on Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:12 pm
thanks Norman...I dedicate this one to YOU and all of my other friends here in this forum!!! thanks for being such GREAT friends... 
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by Jeff Guest on Fri Aug 18, 2006 10:44 pm
Beautiful write Dana as always, you are such a wonderful talent with a heart of gold!!! Praying for you and your girls!!!
~ Harley Davidson ~
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by Dana Brooks on Sat Aug 19, 2006 2:32 pm
awww thanks so much for the kind and generous comments Sherry & Jeff...I proudly take them to heart...
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by Doug Holt on Sat Aug 19, 2006 3:13 pm
Awesome friendship poetry Dana
Wheres the webmaster ! ?
If he needs great friendship poems for E Cards, he is in the right place.
Beautiful poem, I would send this out for sure Worlwide.
thanks for sharing you gift with us Dana
God Bless You And Yours.
Doug
Wheres the webmaster ! ?
If he needs great friendship poems for E Cards, he is in the right place.
Beautiful poem, I would send this out for sure Worlwide.
thanks for sharing you gift with us Dana
God Bless You And Yours.
Doug
Thoughts Are Living Things With Wings.
You Are Never Alone. When You Think Of Others
And They Think Of You.
No Matter Where You Are
GOD Is With YOU All The Time.
Doug Holt
You Are Never Alone. When You Think Of Others
And They Think Of You.
No Matter Where You Are
GOD Is With YOU All The Time.
Doug Holt
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hi, Dana Brooks'
by Shirley Shaw on Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:33 am
This ws truly a 'Beautiful Poem ', Dana. All of yours are, but I really felt this one. It ws 'so sweet', and 'sincere'...I 'Loved it'. Thanks for sharing it...'God Bless You & Yours'. Love, shirley ann shaw...............
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by Dana Brooks on Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:08 pm
thanks to the both of you Doug & Shirley from the bottom of my heart... 
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by Miss Caroline on Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:10 am
Very pleasant and heartwarming poem Dana. Yes, I too would send it out.
GOD loves You, and so do I.
Luv Ya
CAROL
In God, all things are possible.Luke 17: 27
Luv Ya
CAROL
In God, all things are possible.Luke 17: 27
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by Dana Brooks on Wed Aug 23, 2006 7:53 pm
thanks so much Carol...glad that you enjoyed my little friendship poem...
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by Linner on Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:16 am
Hi Dana !! Hey, Girl...this is a terrific friendhsip poem ! You write straight from your heart, and it shows so well in this piece. God Bless !!
LINDA 
LINDA
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by Dana Brooks on Thu Aug 24, 2006 3:50 pm
thank you so much Linda, glad you enjoyed this poem...you have a wonderful soul thank you for being so kind to me...
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