My Perfect Love

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My Perfect Love

Postby latinadiva on Fri Aug 05, 2005 1:55 pm

When I first talked to you,
I didn't know what to say,
But the more we talked,
The more my heart gave way

But now when I think of you,
And how you changed my life,
I can't imagine,
A day without your light

You light up my day,
As if you were the sun,
You are that sense of completion,
When my difficult project is done

You are my strength, and wisdom,
And the keeper of my heart
Whose grip never weakens,
Even when we're apart,

I think of you all day,
And dream of you all night,
And every night I wish
That you could hold me tight

you are always on my mind,
No matter what time or day,
Even when i shouldn't
I think about you anyway

And when I think of you this much
The day seems so long
And all the time we spend apart,
Just seems so wrong

You are my special gift
Sent from up above
Sent to me from heaven
Sent for me to love

Thank you for your smile
And your light that fills my dreams
You always make it brighter
No matter how dark it seems
Tyann
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Postby Guest on Fri Aug 05, 2005 3:01 pm

:lol:
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Postby exoticprincess23 on Sat Aug 06, 2005 4:58 pm

:P
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i really liked it[i][/i]
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hello

Postby arealladiesman2000 on Sat Aug 06, 2005 11:40 pm

hi hun how r u doing? i hope u like this poem im sending u [/list]
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Postby latinadiva on Sun Aug 07, 2005 7:10 pm

Ok I'll be looking for it
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Postby jokernick on Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:06 am

hello,Tyann. "To be or not to be...." is the eternal question. " is it a woman..or a man?"does it make any diffrence?i don't think so. the poem is beautiful and ,reading it ,took me to a journey in the past.. it opened a door to a sweet memory... of that moment when i wanted to say just that,but i couldn't find the right words.i only felt them. i belive men ,as women, can find themselfs in your words..and i thank you for it.
".... You are my special gift
Sent from up above
Sent to me from heaven
Sent for me to love

Thank you for your smile
And your light that fills my dreams
You always make it brighter
No matter how dark it seems..."
beautiful!
@-"nickolass"-@
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Postby latinadiva on Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:07 pm

Thank you Jokernick
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Postby webmaster on Sun Aug 14, 2005 3:42 pm

Congrats LatinaDiva! Your poem made it as a feature:

http://www.nethugs.com/myperfectlove.shtml
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Postby nikki28 on Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:23 am

I just had to say I loved your poem it was very moving. You can really tell that the person really loves the other person in this poem and the way it was written it was perfect. great poem!!!!!! :D
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Postby latinadiva on Mon Aug 15, 2005 10:27 am

Thank you Nikki
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How are you doing??

Postby fami89 on Wed Aug 24, 2005 10:16 am

:P :D Dear Latinadiva,
I want to say that i love this poem so much because it is tell you how i feel about other people that i like. And i hope that you can send me more poem about a gurl who don't know if she is in love or if her part is in love with her.
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Especially for you

Postby Elizabeth Nalla Minoza on Wed Aug 24, 2005 2:59 pm



Especially for you

Is an honor to have you in my line and your intilligence gives me freedom from within,

In everything that i conquest i am accompined with your intilligence,
and when my days seem so long to let it pass with no one to turn in my pressent world but to read you make it easier,

Thank you for giving stability to my believes,
Elizabeth Nalla Minoza
 

Postby Guest on Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:40 pm

i really like this poem it was amazing and very touching
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Re: My Perfect Love

Postby Guest on Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:42 pm

i really liked your poem it was amazing and very touching
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hi

Postby harsh on Thu Aug 25, 2005 4:38 am

[ :oops: quote="Anonymous"]:lol:[/quote]
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